Thursday, October 30, 2025

Ode to My Two Torn Blouses

 Last week, I was looking for something at the back of my closet.  I did not find it but I did come across two shirts I had been very fond of and forgotten I had.  One was white with flowers and the other was blue, a gift from my sister Andrea.  Pleased to have something "new" to wear, I wore the blue one to work with a cardigan and when I got home I saw the shirt had split under the arm (luckily, my office is so cold I had not removed my sweater).  Undaunted, I put on the other shirt the next morning and it tore before I even left the house!  Neither seems very fixable, which made me sad, although I guess they were at least ten years old.  I thought about writing an ode to my two torn blouses, then I wondered if that's the sort of thing ChatGBT does.  Yes, it is - how crazy!  As a joke, I found the website and entered a longish sentence about the items, and see what happened:  

Ode to My Two Torn Blouses


O humble garments, once so fair and fine,

Soft draped across my shoulders’ gentle line—

You bore the touch of sunlight, whispered air,

Now frayed and torn, yet still you linger there.


First, you, white blouse, with blossoms strewn like dreams,

A garden stitched in cotton’s tender seams.

Petals of thread that never wilted, bright,

You caught the morning’s gold, you carried light.

Now one small tear has found your silken side,

A wound the needle’s mercy can’t quite hide.

Yet still, your flowers bloom despite the scar—

A quiet proof of who we truly are.


And you, sweet blue, with patterned calm and grace,

Like waves that dance upon a still lake’s face,

Your sky-touched hue, so gentle, cool, and clear,

Brought peace to heart and mind when worn, my dear.

Your rip lies small, yet speaks of time and wear,

Of all the days we braved without a care—

The laughter, coffee stains, and fleeting chance,

The spinning rhythm of a lived-in dance.


O torn companions, fabric, thread, and past,

Your beauty was not meant to ever last.

Yet still you rest within my drawer, entwined,

Not ruined—only loved, and redefined.

For in each fray, each rent, each faded hue,

There beats the soft, enduring heart of you.

2 comments:

Sue in Suffolk said...

Incredible what AI can do with words!

CLM said...

Incredible and creepy, right? If I had an "ode style" it could probably have written one that sounded like me.